Thank you Benjamin. Will look into the spacing, but I am afraid adding more images will make it more claustrophobic ;)

Thanks for the heads up Andy. Yes it definitely needs a call to action.

One last thing :)

How can I judge that the analysis I am doing is any good? and are there software tools to help out with for example creating a heuristic evaluation?

Thank you so much. I am not sure how to thank you :)

I will consider all the points and check the articles. Thank you :D:D

Thank you so much, that's the kind of feedback I wanted/needed.

1. So I should change the tone and the terms used from critique to usability evaluation, right?
2. What about the cover letter, what do you think I should improve?
3. Did you think the usability evaluation was useful? How can I improve it? Should I go into more details?
4. What other UX techniques can I use to offer more value for the startup/company I am applying for?
5. Can you point me to a learning resource about UX analysis? I thought that what I did was that...What's the difference between heuristic evaluation and UX analysis?

Sorry for the number of questions, but I just want to learn and improve :)

Thank you so much for your help.

Will check them out and get back to you. Thank you:D

Thank you Alex for your comment. I completely agree with you. Do you mind me asking if you have an undergraduate degree in design or did you start your career with another degree, science or engineering?

Thank you Drew. Will definitely check these out.

I am not sure yet, but most probably I wouldn't continue in the academic/research track and would start using what I learnt to design better products mostly mobile apps because that's what I have already been doing in the past 4 years.

I think there is a broad range of HCI degrees from CS focused to design focused. I am looking for a design related one. Do you have any specific program in mind?

Thank you Seb for your reply. I completely agree with you and would love to have some guidance. However, the problem is that I live in a country where degrees are overrated and my parents are not only pushing me to pursue a masters degree, but are willing to pay for it. That's the only reason why I am looking for one :)