Uber's Undoing Part III: Redemption(elischiff.com)

over 4 years ago from Eli Schiff, elischiff.com

  • Eli SchiffEli Schiff, over 4 years ago

    Sometimes it's valid to not spell things out in advance. Perhaps there was room for giving more hints as to the final conclusion but I feel it was if not explicit, it was at least partially implicit in the early sections what was to come and my intent.

    I definitely could make my writing simpler.

    It's clear you've read it and I do appreciate your feedback. I'll consider more explicit foreshadowing next time.

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