Sometimes it's valid to not spell things out in advance. Perhaps there was room for giving more hints as to the final conclusion but I feel it was if not explicit, it was at least partially implicit in the early sections what was to come and my intent.
I definitely could make my writing simpler.
It's clear you've read it and I do appreciate your feedback. I'll consider more explicit foreshadowing next time.
Sometimes it's valid to not spell things out in advance. Perhaps there was room for giving more hints as to the final conclusion but I feel it was if not explicit, it was at least partially implicit in the early sections what was to come and my intent.
I definitely could make my writing simpler.
It's clear you've read it and I do appreciate your feedback. I'll consider more explicit foreshadowing next time.