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My new website about hip hop(franklinsweekly.com)

almost 6 years ago from William Bengtsson, Product designer

  • Ed FairmanEd Fairman, almost 6 years ago

    Like it - nice and clean style. The wording is a little off though in various places -

    'Franklins locate and select four links of hip hop' - doesn't read well. The service name is 'Franklins' not 'Franklin', so the text should be 'locates and selects...' or 'Franlinks can/will locate and select...'

    Might be worth proofreading your content. Otherwise, good job!

    1 point
    • William BengtssonWilliam Bengtsson, almost 6 years ago

      Thank you Ed! I've corrected the grammar and will upload later tonight when home. Thank you for checking that. English isn't my primary language, hence it'll be slighly off here and there unfortunately. This is a good way to practice! Thank you, will proof read everything again!

      2 points