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The portfolio of Jonathan Patterson(jonathanpatterson.com)

over 6 years ago from TomTom Tom, Designer

  • Alex CampAlex Camp, over 6 years ago

    You can def see the uniqueness and creativity in this site. Some of the text is hard to read but job well done on the design and execution.

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    • Jonathan PattersonJonathan Patterson, over 6 years ago

      Hey Alex, can you point out a couple examples? I'm always looking for stuff to fix!

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      • Bugsy SailorBugsy Sailor, over 6 years ago

        I somewhat agree when I look at the 14/16px font sizes with the white text on a saturated background. Small thought. Killer portfolio regardless.

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      • Alex CampAlex Camp, over 6 years ago

        Sure. For example on the about page, the small light text in the philosophy, skills and apps boxes. On the portfolio, the nav at the top Pull Ups, Venier etc. Your answers on the Sup page, and the actual links on the contact page are hard to read.

        I'm on a Retina display which could have an effect on the font rendering FYI.

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        • Jonathan PattersonJonathan Patterson, over 6 years ago

          Thanks for the detailed feedback Alex! I was thinking the text might be a bit too delicate but nobody had mentioned anything until now. I'm going to definitely address the typography more in the next iteration.

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